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Prayer by ~Libahunt:iconLibahunt:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Spiritual > Open


Please, great master birds
Give your daughter wings
Give her strength
Great masters, please!

Let the feathers cover her skin
Let her bones become hollow
Let her step forward on her road
Oh great birds, master birds

Isn't it my time already?
To move on to the next world
Please, take your daughter with you
Great father crow, I beg you!

I believe I'm ready
Do you think so too?
Please master birds
Let me follow you.
©2004-2008 ~Libahunt
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Submitted: October 24, 2004
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I'm tired and not able to control my actions and it's not my fault that the submit-button is so easy to find.

The inspiration came from 's Crow Totem [link]
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~donotkilldemons:icondonotkilldemons: Oct 24, 2004, 2:23:09 PM
I like it. It sounds desperate and calm to me yet filled with tears at the same time. Nice prayer. :kiss:

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Morning will come. Just pray you're there to see it.
~Stars-of-the-Water:iconStars-of-the-Water: Oct 24, 2004, 8:34:18 PM
Your work is so different from anything else I've seen that I always know I'm in for something good! :nod: You did a great job conveying the sense of desperation you must feel...if only it were as simple as flying away from troubles. It does make you wonder if it's your time to go. Great work! :+favlove:
~Libahunt:iconLibahunt: Oct 25, 2004, 9:10:40 AM
Thank you for the nice comment :) Though it's not me in the poem, I'm just the writer =p

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When you're going through hell, keep going
~Libahunt:iconLibahunt: Oct 25, 2004, 9:12:35 AM
Thanks :>

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When you're going through hell, keep going
~donotkilldemons:icondonotkilldemons: Oct 25, 2004, 9:27:29 AM
welcome :-!

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Morning will come. Just pray you're there to see it.
~Stars-of-the-Water:iconStars-of-the-Water: Oct 26, 2004, 3:27:03 PM
I wasn't sure if you were the speaker, but it felt like it to me! I now know otherwise! You're welcome! :nod: I love your stuff! :floating:
~Libahunt:iconLibahunt: Oct 28, 2004, 12:12:02 PM
Writer should never be mixed with the narrator. Or at least that's what our Finnish teacher has been telling me :) (not talking about the angsty 13-year-olds who are weeping over their lost boyfriends though).

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When you're going through hell, keep going
~Stars-of-the-Water:iconStars-of-the-Water: Oct 28, 2004, 4:42:52 PM
Oohhh burn!!! (sorry, I just watched That 70s show ^^;) I can understand why she said that. I'm rarely the speaker in my poetry-but I don't go to extremes to prove it to people if they think otherwise.
~donotkilldemons:icondonotkilldemons: Oct 29, 2004, 1:53:34 PM
oh fine, I am the narrator in almost all my poems and in many of them I weep about losing someone. So I'm 13! wonderful, thanks.

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Morning will come. Just pray you're there to see it.
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